Here’s how it’ll work:

Step 1: Click here to add some Jay to your day and let me know you’ll be sending me your About Page copy draft

Step 2: You do the course work (yeah sorry, you still have to do all the yakka!)

Step 3: Send me your finished-to-the-point-you-can-get-it draft in Word or Google Docs

Step 4: Within the month, I’ll record you a video explaining my suggestions and make notes all over your fine work. No red pens will be involved, just helpful, conversion copy advice

Step 5: Keep what you love, rework what you need to, then populate your new About Page

Step 6: Wait for the data/sales/love to roll in

Step 7: Pat yourself on the back and take yourself out for cake

Here’s why it’s cool:

1: You’ll pay a whole wad less than if you hired me to edit this copy for you, write this copy from scratch for you, or even book a 1:1 copy mentoring call where we get through as much as we can in an hour. In fact, it’s about $200 less than a single 60 minute copy mentoring session with me plus I’ll actually make notes on your work instead of just telling you what to do with it

2: By snaffling this now, instead of coming back to me later for editing or reviewing, you’ve set yourself a deadline with in-built accountability and motivation to get the course completed and the copy written

And we all know that’s a major roadblock when buying a course – actually implementing the work.