You’re about to find the right words to tell your story to the world…

and find the right audience to go with your words.

But wait!

Hold up one second, because while confirmation and all the access instructions are whizzing their way through the interwebs to your inbox,

I’ve got that once-in-a-lifetime review offer lined up ready for you to add to your order.

Get a 1:1 copy review of your freshly written About page for a fraction of the regular Crispy price


“…That feedback was single-handedly the most powerful part of the process…” – Trina, Unfail Your Email course participant

✍️ Save thousands of dollars on a 1:1 About Page copy review

✍️ Give yourself some serious incentive to finish your About Page conversion copywriting

✍️ Hit go on that About Page knowing it’s the full kit and crispy copy caboodle

 “…And, the biggest value by far is getting Jay’s detailed, constructive feedback on all things email – she even gives it via video so I can play it back as I need…”

Here’s how it’ll work:

Step 1: Click here to add some Jay to your day and let me know you’ll be sending me your About Page copy draft

Step 2: You do the course work (yeah sorry, you still have to do all the yakka!)

Step 3: Send me your finished-to-the-point-you-can-get-it draft in Word or Google Docs

Step 4: Within the month, I’ll record you a video explaining my suggestions and make notes all over your fine work. No red pens will be involved, just helpful, conversion copy advice

Step 5: Keep what you love, rework what you need to, then populate your new About Page

Step 6: Wait for the data/sales/love to roll in

Step 7: Pat yourself on the back and take yourself out for cake

Here’s why it’s cool:

1: You’ll pay a whole wad less than if you hired me to edit this copy for you, write this copy from scratch for you, or even book a 1:1 copy mentoring call where we get through as much as we can in an hour. In fact, it’s about $200 less than a single 60 minute copy mentoring session with me plus I’ll actually make notes on your work instead of just telling you what to do with it

2: By snaffling this now, instead of coming back to me later for editing or reviewing, you’ve set yourself a deadline with in-built accountability and motivation to get the course completed and the copy written

And we all know that’s a major roadblock when buying a course – actually implementing the work.

Speaking of deadlines…

this one is simple. You just have to send me your draft within 3 months of purchasing the course to access the discount. I mean, you have access as of **right now** so get writin’ already!

“…My favourite (and least favourite) part was the homework. I quickly discovered that Jay is right, ‘writing is a doing word’. But I pushed through, as Jay checked all homework and gave invaluable feedback, always in a very constructive way…”


Because a woman needs choices







* $300 AUD is around $228 USD or £165

All prices are + GST for Australian clients and you’ll be charged in AUD. Check your exchange rates if you’re in another country – you’ll be pleasantly surprised!

Ready to get writing? Go, check your email for a confirmation and a link and login to the member platform.

If the email doesn’t appear in your inbox within a couple of hours (and isn’t in your spam folder), please drop me a line at so I can hunt down a gremlin and get you what you need.